Joke Writing Mechanics
Difference between Setup & Punchline?
Jokely Tip
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Setup lays a believable track (the lie). Punchline derails it with a surprise (the truth). Misdirection is the motor.
Record setups and punchlines separately — the app highlights the dead words.
Writer's block?
Voice First
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Writer's block is fear. Say whatever's true and dumb first. Use quick voice notes: your brain is terrible at saving punchlines unless you do.
Jot premises, not jokes. Edit later.
How many punchlines per joke?
#MainPunch
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Start with one punch that slaps. Add tags only when they hit as hard. Most newbies add filler that slows the laugh.
Setlist & Structure
First 5-minute open mic set?
#Opener
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Open with your best joke. End with your best closer. Between them, place two to three solid bits. Don’t test radical new material in the first 30 seconds.
Tag each joke as #Opener, #Closer and build sets by drag+filter.
Memorize word-for-word?
Stage Rule
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Memorize punchlines exactly; let setups breathe. Word-perfect payoffs are what buy you laughs. Use Performance Mode to see where you must be precise.
Stage Performance
What to do after I "bomb"?
Field Notes
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Don't sulk. Collect data. Write down: when the room checked out and what you changed from script. Bombing is feedback — harvest it.
Is my energy level right?
#Energy
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If you look bored, the crowd is bored. If you're frantic, they're confused. Record sets — pick the energy where the laughs hit hardest.
Crowd Work & Improv
When to do crowd work?
Pivot
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If your written stuff's landing, don't gamble. Use crowd work when the room's cold or after a bomb to reset energy.
Safe crowd work question?
#GoTo
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"What do you do for work?"—safe, easy to riff, and often yields gold. Avoid personal trauma or religion.
Timing & Rhythm
Am I rushing punchlines?
Pace
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If laughs don't land, you're too fast. Count "one-Mississippi" after the punchline before moving on. The crowd needs a beat to give permission to laugh.
Ideal setup length?
15–30s
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For open mics, aim for 15–30 seconds. Longer setups need authority. If you lose them in the setup, the payoff dies. Edit mercilessly.
Callbacks & Themes
What is a callback?
Theme
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A callback references an earlier joke to amplify the laugh. It makes the set feel like a finished story. Don't force them; plant seeds early.
Too many callbacks?
Rule
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One or two solid callbacks is enough. Overusing them turns your show into an inside joke. Use them to reward attention.
Stage Presence
What is stage presence?
Impression
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It's how you occupy silence. Breathing, pauses, eye contact, and confidence. Practice walk-ons until they feel inevitable.
Bombing & Recovery
How to recover?
Recover
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Onstage: smile, reset, move on. Offstage: write down the exact moment and reason. Bombs refine your taste faster than success.
Recording & Analysis
What to record?
Analytics
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Record every set. Track laugh length, timing, and wording changes. Know which words are oxygen and which are dead weight.
Networking
How to get booked?
Career
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Cultivate relationships. Offer value (promote shows, bring friends). Deliver clean, reliable sets — reputation travels fast.
Character Development
Building a persona?
Voice
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Your persona is a sharpened version of your truth. If audiences can describe you in one sentence, you have a persona.
Dealing with Hecklers
Handling hecklers?
Control
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Don't argue. Make the audience your ally with a quick, funny line. If aggressive, call the host. Keep the room safe.
Industry & Business
Making income?
Money
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Gig fees, writing for others, workshops, brand deals — diversify. Treat comedy like a small business, not a hobby.
Tech & Productivity
Tools to track jokes?
Apps
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Voice memos, notes, spreadsheet. Jokely's tagging features combine capture with analytics.
AI & Future Tools
Will AI replace writers?
Future
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AI can suggest edits and spot dead words — but taste is human. Use AI for testing, trust live feedback for survival.
Resources & Tools
Stop losing material. Start polishing it daily.
Jokely Says
"Write like a fox: quick, hungry, and full of teeth. Record everything. Keep only what bites."